This fits so well with the books I'm reading currently from Kim Harrison Put away the armors and make her hair red and tada There you have your story x) Well... the demon and Rachel aren't together... (yet? I'm still in book 8 of the 12) But damn she have to break and love him 'cause it'll be as amazing as this painting!!!!!!!
Wow! This is incredible! I can practically feel the passion and tension between them! You've captured the relationship between them so well, I really want to know more about them! xD I like how he's not holding her arm, but it's poised to hold her as though he's conflicted with whether or not he should hold her, almost like he's afraid she'll disappear. And that feeling only gets stronger with the way you've drawn her to look ethereal and made of light. It's wonderful!!